Is this good / correct english ?

There's a amazing (...and more) lady where I play live poker one day in the month. She speaks only english and now I'm wondering whether it's fine or not and how does it sound if I ask her...

"Hey, if I do meet your non-poker action requirements, whatabout having a drink in the city later on?"

Any feedback or comments are welcome...thx !

Very well put,Lips.
I believe I happened to be one of those who used to stand behind...rather not speak so much afraid of it might get misinterpreted or criticized.
Sometimes it's just hard to describe or explain things in a way I would in my native language...

Schwede, I had no idea you have this great sense of humor in you and you have a way of writing so perfect and like Lips said, I find men with accents, very sexy and charming so please don't hesitate to speak to her.
I am dying to hear more of this amazing woman you described and oh,
"Hey, if I do meet your non-poker action requirements, whatabout having a drink in the city later on?"
You are priceless!

I think you two ladies (Lips and Nan) have summed it up perfectly.

Way back in my younger days, I met a man who was German and he could speak no English at all and I no German.   We ended up as a couple and one of the best parts was learning each others language - I taught him English (with a nice southern accent) and he helped me with the German language. 

Don't worry about language being a barrier, if anything, she will love it as I did.

Good luck and keep us posted how it goes.

blue

How romantic~~~I am swoon by the picture of how it went with my imagination.
That's how pretty much it was with me when I first came to America...wish I went to England instead to have a shot at Daniel Craig...ugh!
Blue...you need to tell me all about this romance!

I am sure you are a lady killer buddy. Shuffle the cards and show her all the tricks you got up your sleeves at the next poker game.