Original poem

I just wanted to share a short poem i wrote with you and i hope you enjoy it. I have been writing a lot lately since i am on a small vacation from gaming so nothing much to do right now. I hope you like it.

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Thanks for sharing the poem Rena. It seems that this break from gambling have a positive effect on your creative side.

I can almost see a child or parent with their hands clasped reciting it beside the bed at night, like a prayer or mantra. It was quite lovely. Thank you for sharing.

Lovely poem Rena. 

Thanks for sharing.

Nicely done Rena, thanks for sharing!

Also it has a good rhythm, I think your poem can become lyrics for a song easily.

I like it! 

Very NICE rena!


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Hi

I saw this little thread and was delighted to see your wonderful poem.

I just love to write and poem is one passion I really like also.

Here is a sample!

The bright stars above.

Many times I see unique stars in the sky, I wonder where they come from and why?
Could this be the begining of something that would last , or is it the old patterns that lies there in the wast.
Better off seeing the stars so bright, in the presens that shines with light.
Could my wishes all come true when I look at them intense, or is it just my imagination in it's sense.
Searching for love and company in my dreams, could this fortune of luck still as it seems, that the hope is always there, without any considerations about ti here.
Maby someday I find my soulmate a friend, that I can be with until the end.
I really hope the star above, would lead me and my unknown to love.
The star that represents love and peace, i'm searching for all there is.
As a unpolished diamond in many ways I love to be whole, as there is would be affinity for the soul.
Will the begining end soon so I can find the missing pieces of my heart, Or is there any begining of love that will start? For two people who can share all there dreams for ours to start, I hope I find it someday even thru pain and sufferment being apart. The star in the sky will someday shine true, for us to look at when we are two.

Regards Delvis Elvis

Thank you eveyone who took the time to look at my poem .That was long ago i don't really write much anymore. Back then i was full of energy . Bright eyed  .....